Unfortunately I only have 500 characters to tell you how great I feel you film is...First and foremost, congrats on being so creative with your story. The writing is superb. Your dramatic arc is exactly what it should be. You have all the story structure elements in place. Great cinematic coverage, depth of field, exceptional sound design, score, inserts performances. If I had any advice...I would say, rehearse with your actors. Jake at times could was a little rigid but a little. Beautiful!
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These young filmmakers are truly talented. They seem to be able to write, shoot, act and tell a story visually that is heartwarming and moving. I'm truly shocked at the talent level of this team. If they decide to make a go of it in the film industry, I'd keep my eye out on the silver screen for their names.
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I thoroughly enjoyed this short film! I thought that the writing and the story was very thought out and the ending fit the story perfectly. However, the actor for Jake could have used a bit more practice because some of his lines felt a bit forced. But other than that I thought that all of the elements of this film fit together very well. I would recommend this film to beginner film makers as an example of great writing, editing skills, and great cinematography.
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