After having yet another tempestuous argument with her father, Riley declares this screaming match to be the last before grabbing her bag and slamming the door behind her. While the police are out searching for Riley, the father can’t stop thinking about her; everything reminds him of her—and every hour exacerbates his contrition. When his daughter returns, he’s elated with hop...
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Colorful! Good Cinematography, use of lights and editing. Made for a unique and effective story. The Acting was very nice and realistic.
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Great pacing with your opening. Love the music and how you finished your opening. Well done. Great color timing and nice work with the lighting you used. You have a great concept here. I would love to see you dive a bit deeper in development to create a bit more depth to your story and the arc. Building the narrative so that the transition from the bad life to understanding each other is a bit more gradual. That should be your whole second act and it happens super quick. Keep up the good work.
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I think this film has a great story and many good production aspects. Please watch audio levels and transitions.
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