A high school student who uses sticky notes to "encourage" herself to do better, but the notes are very demeaning. She goes thru a journey to find a better way to motivate herself in a more healthy way.
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Well written story. Worked perfectly for short film. Volume was a bit uneven and lighting made some scenes difficult to see. A couple of awkward/ abrupt edits/cutaways which may have not been necessary.
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The concept behind this film is awesome. I loved the shot of the notes raining down on her. The editing could have been a lot tighter. You have to stay ahead of your audience when cutting, or they'll get bored. Everyone should see this movie for the themes. We could all use a few les self-critiques.
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Good story. Please watch both audio and video transitions between scenes.
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