A misunderstood poet wrestles with the need to be creative, as her sister tries to prevent her creativity at all costs.
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Good Cinematography. Nice intro GFX. Story was there for her to break out of her shell of shyness. Audio needed work. and some editing issues to tighten up. But great job overall!
Very nice story with a feel good ending. Nice Cinematography.
Nice job here. Great choice of location and I like your camera work. I also like your effort to light and really paint the cinematic picture. I really enjoyed your well thought out transitions. I also noticed and appreciated your efforts with the sound design (I would have softened your snaps a little but great effort there). Once you do the sound design then take your film into a final mix and really balance all the sounds...dialogue, music,sound effects, etc. Keep up the good work.