A woman leaving work late at night fails to notice a carjacker hiding in her backseat, but her life is saved in more ways than one through the actions of a kind-hearted stranger.
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This short was very very well done, I like the fact that you used adult actors for the story and shot it very well for it being night time out. Great job!
This would have been so much stronger with a different ending. The informational slides at the end made it feel like a PSA.
I like your concept here. I was a bit confused when the other girl got in her car. I was thinking for some reason it was the girl that we were tracking in the story. One way to catch this is to screen your film for a few people and ask for their thoughts. Being close to the story and footage you likely wouldn't see it. Other than that, you did a nice job.