A Photographer (Allison played by Nora Hernandez) is on a work trip for her boss. She starts to notice strange things happening around her from lights flickering to her camera malfunctioning. While she takes a trip to the aquarium, she will run into a new horror she didn't know she would discover.
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I think I get where you were heading, but for me it missed the the plot line. Some great moments of anxiety and stalking but many questions... if you went from her turning off the light to all going back on to the end shot ... brilliant. Maybe if you added an extra element(s) of light through her random visit to an aquarium and taking the subway to create a through line? Solid idea here, just needs more story integration. Additional sound editing possibly by giving the "light" a distinct voice?
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This short is on to something. With better cinematography and more dialogue. you could have a real winner here. Nice use of practical lighting. keep in mind the need for more key lighting to help offset a bright backdrop. the red lighting at the end adds a nice touch but needs to be motivated. think of instead of having it on, that it is triggered by the event and not letting the viewers know what's about to happen. keep sharp focus in mind when shooting scenes with low lighting.
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This film was a fun ride. Good use of lights at the end and very nice cinematography. Please watch your audio and video transitions, they could use a little work. Also, dialog or a narrator could have help us with the story here.
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