An intern takes a trip to a business conference with aim of pleasing his boss, Josh. This conference may be his last chance to procure a job offer following his internship.
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So I think you have something here, it just needs more development. Maybe switch up the camera angles on the opening to draw you in for the whole monologue backstory. There was some great build up and shots of the phone and the toilet shot... classic , but then the phone didn't really factor in to the final scene? And rather than dip to black, just show the exit scene. Great ideas here. Title?
I really enjoyed the twist at the end. Please watch your shot composition in that it did confuse me. I was a little lost with both low shots during the interview. Story was easy to follow, just watch audio mixing and transitions.
The film had a good start. But then got in its own way. Lighting and sound were uneven. No score/music to build tension was sorely missing. Thought the image(face) in the toilet flush was actually well filmed although it did not really help develop story (when it could have). Some continuity flaws. Edits felt uneven.