A short PSA about covid safety in school.
Geiden Simpson
3SDylan 3SBlair
2
6.12
Geiden Simpson
2
6.80
Carson LaBeau
Geiden Simpson
4
10.92
3SCole 3SUhre
2
6.92
3SCole 3SUhre
Geiden Simpson
3SDylan 3SBlair
Carson LaBeau
2
4.48
3SCole 3SUhre
3SDylan 3SBlair
Carson LaBeau
Geiden Simpson
2
5.56
This was a very informative, well crafted PSA. The writing really stood out, and I can see that the director's vision was very well executed. The cinematography and acting were a little weak; perhaps try using more interesting angles to film from, and trying adding more emotion and hand movements. Overall, it was put together very well and accomplished its goal superbly!!
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The writing in the film doesn't include any extra interesting bits other than giving direct information. The director could have chosen less distracting scenes with attention to lighting. The editing could have used software to correct the shakiness of the camera. The editing could have used more than just still shots of people talking. Using slow zooms in and out could have made for a more interesting viewing experience. The footage could have used color correction to make the image clearer.
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It’s slightly difficult to make out what some of them are saying; the audio is a bit muffled. Also, the music is a little too loud. Maybe lower the music slightly when someone is talking and bring it back up when someone isn’t. That is something I’ve learned to do with editing. Your writing was pretty good, but the overall quality of the acting, film, etc. just didn’t hit it out of the park. The first and second cut were pretty good, but after that, it started to derail. I hope this helps!
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