Two friends are walking together, when one friend decides to throw his water bottle and litter. The other friend stops to pick it up and tells his friend he should pick up after himself, the friend who littered agreed that he should not litter and throws the water bottle away.
Zackery Robinson
4
7.60
Zackery Robinson
4
6.78
Vincent Mendoza
0
8.52
Zackery Robinson
4
5.08
Vincent Mendoza
0
6.06
Vincent Mendoza
Zackery Robinson
0
6.76
I think this film teaches us not to make earth a stinky and trushy place.
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Good job on creating a film! I think the transitions were messy and getting rid of them would make the film move smoother. But, I love the message!
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Film has a interesting conflict . . . Friend is SEEN picking up bottle thrown by his buddy. Main character issue SIGHS dramatically making one wonder if he will be receptive to the message of not littering. It however has a major "video grammar" issue of multiple wipes instead of cuts. While interesting it became a distraction. It was not done in the context of the next day or a different place/scene. Cuts would help it FLOW as it all happened in the NOW. Includes a strong take away message.
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